Thread:Mirai Moon/@comment-5525077-20151222020410/@comment-5870363-20160811214722

Mirai Moon wrote: make it eventful

add in character introductions. How does x act, who is x, how does x look, etc.

Although I'd like to get into detail about my characters' personality and physical traits, I must respect their privacy. The last thing I'd want is for one of the people in the story to find it and know it was me writing about them.